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    Cool Creative Storys

    hay i made this post os we can write some storys about any thing that comes to you first you can make it up exaggerate the story to make more interesting there are two rules be creative and have fun

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    one day i was riding my horse, BARRINGTON BLUE, in the cross country show.
    As we got on to the treelined track the wind was blowing 20 knots. Baz stopped and started to play up. I kicked him on, as we moved on the trees were moaning then crack. Whack as the tree branch landed on my head and I tried to get the branch off. Baz spooked and galloped up, up onto Ruby Red hill and started to buck. I grabbed hold of his mane as my foot came out of the stirrup. Whack, I heard a crack and pain shot up through my leg. I was on for 10 seconds then I blacked out as I hit the ground and I heard my horse's hoofbeats coming closer and closer, as I sat up all I saw was my horse flying over me. Whack! This time the pain was in my head, I blacked out again but this time when I woke up I was in a bed and my mum was right there beside me crying. I said mum .and she look up at me and said thank god you are a live the doctor you wouldn't Survive a fall like that. what fall?
    (gasp) is BARRINGTON BLUE ok did I hurt him? no you did not hurt him he's in his stable eating hay. my mum told me the hole story. when BARRINGTON BLUE came back with out me on him. I started to panic I got to geter who know the tracks every one at the show was looking for you a little girl found you on the ground. she know you were missing and you need help and she kick her pony in to a gallop and galloped back to us. to tell us where you were. and when thay got to you. you were neer dead they said that you had lost a lot of blood. and you were air lifted to hospital.
    and you were in a deap coma. for four weeks.
    just as she ended the story the doctor came in he said I leg. and minor concusion was lucky to be a live a ride like that could of killed you.
    but you broke your I stayed in hospital for for two more weeks and I had to stay in the cast for two more weeks and I still ride today
    Last edited by kassie jones; 12-03-2009 at 10:18 AM.

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    Good spelling and punctuation too!
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    I am terrible at creative stories, I will just read yours. They are great.

    Any posts made under the name of Di_dee1 one can be used by anyone as I do not give a rats.

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    Quote Originally Posted by aussiemyf7 View Post
    Good spelling and punctuation too!
    Very good!!

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    there is more

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